高三英语短文改错:Making friends is one of the greatest pleasure that

高三英语短文改错:Making friends is one of the greatest pleasure that people can ...
高三英语短文改错:
Making friends is one of the greatest pleasure that people can enjoy them.Real friends are those who can share happiness and sorrow.A man cannot enjoy his true life with the help of his friends.When we got into trouble,our friends will always help us out.
How to choose friends are a big problem for everyone.There are some friends always laugh at us coldly when we fail in the exams or something else.Of course we would rather don't have there so-called friends.
How can we treat friends?This is same important problem.Remember:giving is always better than taking.We should help our friends out as much as possibly.Only in this way are we able to keep friendship last long.(只允许修改十处)
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Making friends is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy themselves.Real friends are those who can share happiness and sorrow.A man cannot enjoy his true life without the help of his friends.When we get into trouble,our friends will always help us out.
How to choose friends is a big problem for everyone.There are some friends who always laugh at us coldly when we fail in the exams or something else.Of course we would rather not have those so-called friends.
How can we treat friends?This is the same important problem.Remember:giving is always better than taking.We should help our friends out as much as possible.Only in this way are we able to keep friendship lasting long.

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第一句 去掉them
还有 pleasure 改成 pleasures
第三句 with 改成 without
第二段第一句 are 改成 is
第二句 friends 后面加上 who
第三句 don't 改成 not
还有 there 改成 those或者these (这里该不会是打错了吧?本来是these还是there啊?总之ther...

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