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and后加上she.
2.去掉第一个when.
3.在第二个she前加上so.
4.talked--talking.
5.so-- However
6.grad--grabbed
7.sometime--sometimes
改正后的短文如下:
I used to have a cool math teacher in school,and she had a loud voice.
One day she had a sore throat,so she couldn't yell when some guys in
the back were talking.However,as they minded their own business,the
teacher grabbed a chalk and threw it at the guys.She was also naughty
sometimes.
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