英语短文改错,求帮忙,急急急急急

英语短文改错,求帮忙,急急急急急
As we all know the question that choose a university near or far is very important to freshman.Once they choose a university,they won’t change. So the question made many freshman and freshman’s parents worried. Some students choose university in or near their cities ,and other students choose university far their cities.On hand ,students in their city have more convenient in trouble.In additi
ion,students won’t waste time to adapt to new environment.On the other hand,if students choose a university far their city,could open their mind and learn more kownleage.Most of all,they could make friends form other cities.
In my opinion, I will choose a university far my city.because I like travel and new environment .And I can make many new friends in new city.