用过去式叙述我妈妈为我的生日作了一个蛋糕,我和我的朋友一起唱歌跳舞,我们玩得很开心,我们又乘飞机去了北京的外婆家,我们玩

My mother made one for my birthday cake,I and my friends singing and dancing very happy we play,we also fly to Beijing's cooking,we play a day,and at night we returned home,our family,watch television,these programs are very interesting.

My mother made a cake for my birthday. My friends and I sang songs and danced very happily. Then we went to my grandma's home by air in Beijing.We stayed there for one day,and went back home at evening.My family watched TV together. The programs are very interesting.

My mother made me a birthday cake. my friends and I sang and danced together and we all had a good time. Then my whole family flied to my grandma's home in beijing and we enjoyed the time there. Finally we back home at night, and watched TV together. The programs on TV that night was very fascinating.

My mom made a cake for my birthday party.On the party,my friends and I sang and danced together,and we all had a lot of fun.Then we flew to Beijing,where my grandmother is living.We played all day long there.In the evening,we got back home,and later my whole family were watching TV.These programmes are so interesting.