请高手改下英语作文麻烦各位了,改的清楚一些,让我可以很好的认识到自己错误Welcome to Join in Our C

Our club have a long histry.There are a lot of interesting thing wait for
改为：Our club have a long history.There are a lot of interesting things waiting for ；
First ,we often organize everybody watch cartoon
改为：First ,we often organize everybody to watch cartoon ;
Second ,we should organize cosplay one or two times each team
改为 ：后面最好加个时间状语 Second ,we should organize cosplay one or two times each team one month ；
You can play a role of cartoon you like .
改为：You can play a role of the cartoon you like ;
If you still have some questions about club ,you can call this numbers
改为：If you still have some questions about our club ,you can call this number ;
We are welcome you join in us.
改为:Welcome you to join us.
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