英语奇差,马上要中考了,求帮忙改下英语作文,麻烦注出错处,作文如下

1.discussion加复数
2. low -carbon 要加连字符
3. Every one of our classmates改成“everyone in my class”
4 . First,we should save water. Water is one of the most important resources.Water is polluted more and more serious.这句话句式太单一,可以写成“First,we should save water,which is one of the most important resources in our life .However,it is getting seriously polluted day by day . ”
5 . put the rubbish into the right places
6 . third拼写
7. we ought to choose a environmental method to get to work or schools like walking ,bicycling or taking bus rather than driving cars , which can reduce the amount of smoking put into the air .
8 . so protecting envirnment is an importance task for to keep a balance from developing and nature.改成so protecting the envirnment is an importance task to keep the nature in balance and protect it from being destroyed .
你的英语不差的,改的也不是因为有错误,只是锦上添花而已.加油
纯手打,认真改的.望采纳