帮忙修改我的英文日记today,i got a new thing.i cost 390$ for it.i thoug
帮忙修改我的英文日记
today,i got a new thing.i cost 390$ for it.i thought you'd been sipuried to know that.i thought you'd been thought some word that what's that?
ok,i'll tell you.it isn't a secret.i cost 390$ for a music player 5. the mp5 is made from plastic,the colors of the hull is light green and white.i think it seems so beautiful.
ok,i've been able to finish my task.ok.everybody good bey.has a good day.
today,i got a new thing.i cost 390$ for it.i thought you'd been sipuried to know that.i thought you'd been thought some word that what's that?
ok,i'll tell you.it isn't a secret.i cost 390$ for a music player 5. the mp5 is made from plastic,the colors of the hull is light green and white.i think it seems so beautiful.
ok,i've been able to finish my task.ok.everybody good bey.has a good day.
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390$?确定是美元吗 是RMB吧.
you'd been sipuried ->you will surprise.（表示当在未来我了解到时的惊讶）
i thought you'd been thought some word that what's that
你想表述什么?是“我想你应该在猜我买了什么了吧”.可以这样说：I guess you start wondering what I have buy.
made from =mado of ,其实这里意思不准确 你不能表述成MP5是塑料做的 里面还是有金属的吧.可以说外壳是塑料的（covered by plastic)
so beautiful->beautiful
i've been able to finish my task->i've finished my task
good bye->goodbye
has a good day-> have a good day
真的不想打击你 但是你的英语真的很烂 需要提高 加油!
you'd been sipuried ->you will surprise.（表示当在未来我了解到时的惊讶）
i thought you'd been thought some word that what's that
你想表述什么?是“我想你应该在猜我买了什么了吧”.可以这样说：I guess you start wondering what I have buy.
made from =mado of ,其实这里意思不准确 你不能表述成MP5是塑料做的 里面还是有金属的吧.可以说外壳是塑料的（covered by plastic)
so beautiful->beautiful
i've been able to finish my task->i've finished my task
good bye->goodbye
has a good day-> have a good day
真的不想打击你 但是你的英语真的很烂 需要提高 加油!
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