请修改一篇英文日记New Year's ResolutionNew year is coming!At the fine
请修改一篇英文日记
New Year's Resolution
New year is coming!At the fine days,I have some new year's resolution:
I have study better and get good grades.I'm going to play some sports to keep in good health.And I have to write a science fiction and going to give classmates to make them enjoy it.And I 'm going to eat more healthy food.I'm going to keep my room cleam and tidy
New Year's Resolution
New year is coming!At the fine days,I have some new year's resolution:
I have study better and get good grades.I'm going to play some sports to keep in good health.And I have to write a science fiction and going to give classmates to make them enjoy it.And I 'm going to eat more healthy food.I'm going to keep my room cleam and tidy
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"At the fine days"at改为on
I have study better and get good grades.如果说你已经取得好成绩,应该是I studied better than before and got good grades this term.如果是希望下学期能学好,那是i hope to study better and get good grades.
“keep healthy”即可
have 你是不得以才写的吗?如果不是 可以改成i plan to write a science fiction to entertain my classmates as a new year gift.
classmate前一定要加物主代词,“打算”一词可用intend to,plan to等等,不要总是用 be going to
I have study better and get good grades.如果说你已经取得好成绩,应该是I studied better than before and got good grades this term.如果是希望下学期能学好,那是i hope to study better and get good grades.
“keep healthy”即可
have 你是不得以才写的吗?如果不是 可以改成i plan to write a science fiction to entertain my classmates as a new year gift.
classmate前一定要加物主代词,“打算”一词可用intend to,plan to等等,不要总是用 be going to
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