你和班上的同学在周日去敬老院帮助照顾老人。请你根据以下信息,写一篇英文日记。

你和班上的同学在周日去敬老院帮助照顾老人。请你根据以下信息,写一篇英文日记。
写作内容:
活动
安排
内容
1. 时间:2010年12月1日 星期日8:30启程,共进午餐后返回
2. 地点:校门口集中,一个半小时自行车车程
目的地:敬老院(the Nursing Home)
3. 活动:亲切交谈、为老人表演节目、赠送礼物、拍照留念
感受
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写作要求:词数80-120个。 注意:日记的开头已写好。
December 1 st Sunday 2010
Fine
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cindy81 1年前 已收到1个回答 举报

忘了恨 幼苗

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Today we went to the Nursing Home to help take care of the old people .
At 8:30 am, we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. Soon after we got to the Nursing Home, where many old people are staying, we began to chat with them to see how their life is going, and then we sang songs and danced for them. We also presented our gifts, took lots of photos and had lunch together before we came back.
I feel very great to see the old people living so happily in the Nursing Home where they are taken good care of.


这是一篇日记,时态为过去时。文章的要点已经给出,同学在写作时不要遗漏。在写个人感受时可以适当发挥,多运用好的词汇如present等等。同时注意也要用一些好的连接词让文章更流畅一点。

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