king1905
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These days I have been too relaxed. Every day I play computer games for a long time, and watch the soap opera for a long time ,but read book sonly for a while.
but after I played the computer for a long time ,i did not rest any more, because I think I waste too much time on entertainment.
two days ago, I read a novel,.I thought that the novel deeply impressed me , so I wrote a similar story .if you don't mind, look at the short story I wrote , I will copy the text and send it to you.
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第一句还能改得稍微复杂点多加点词汇吗,似乎再添点词会看起来比较完整些
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king1905
这几天我过得似乎太放松了,我每天都玩了很久电脑游戏、又看了很久电视肥皂剧才稍微看了会书。
These days i have led an extreme relaxing life。
Every day i spend most of time on computer games and soap opera,but spare little time to read books。