检查一下这段英文短文有什么问题没有.

除了几处书写错误 大小写和标点符号 外 (I永远大写)
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I will hate you forever.I will never excuse you. 我永远恨你,永远不会原谅你.
I hate you forever. 我永远恨你.
I hate your eyes. 我恨你的眼睛.
I hate your ugly face. 我恨你丑陋的脸.
I hate your smelly mouth. 我恨你的臭嘴.
I hate your nonsense. 我恨你的胡说八道.
I hate that you pretend to be kind-hearted. 我恨你假装善良.
I hate that I treated you so well. 我恨我对你那么好.
I hate you , I loved you . 我恨你,我曾爱过你.

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I will hate you forever.I will never excuse you. （excuse想表达“原谅”？那就用forgive）
I hate you forever.
I hate your eyes.
I hate your ugly face.
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