初二英语作文改错在一次主题班会上大家积极讨论的主题what do you think of computer games

初二英语作文改错
在一次主题班会上大家积极讨论的主题what do you think of computer games?有的同学认为电脑游戏很好玩能放松自己,有的认为电脑游戏有益,能从中学会很多东西.还有的同学认为电脑游戏是浪费时间的一种行为的你同意他们的观点吗请看谈谈你的看法.waste opinion surf the Internet
My opinion is play computer games can make you relax ,but if you addition them .Than they are waste your time .Play computer games can make you very happy and they also can help you a lot in many ways .Such as how answer the question ,how cooking and so on .But if you addictio computer games ,they will waste your many time .Surf the Intent is good and bad
这是我写的,我的观点是玩游戏能让你放松,但如果你沉迷与它它就会浪费你的时间,玩电脑游戏可以使你很高兴,并且还可以在许多方面帮助你,例如怎样回答这个问题,如何做饭,等等.如果你沉迷电脑游戏它将浪费你许多时间,总之上网有益和有不好的方面.

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有一些语法错误,修正如下：
My opinion is: playing computer games can make you relax,make you very happy and they also can help you a lot in many ways, such as how to answer questions , how to cook and so on . But if you are addited to them, they waste your time . Every coin has two sides(每个硬币都有两面/凡事均有两面性）, so does playing computer games. (玩电脑游戏也一样）Sometimes it is good for you, but sometimes it is bad.
你的错误主要在于：动词作主语或宾语时不记得加ing,我们知道动词原形是不能直接作主语或宾语的.
希望对你有用!

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这里也有好几个时态问题弄不清楚，请你帮帮我。作文帮我改的真好，我会背下来，谢谢老师。

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watch spend +时间/钱+doing sth 花时间/钱做某事
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working stop+doing 停止做某事 stop+to do sth 停下来去做某事
began begin to do sth 开始做某事

要想提高英语，要多看一些适合你这个程度的短文、故事等，注意句子的句型及短语的使用。光靠别人讲答案是不行的，明白吗？祝你进步！

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