拜托帮我看一下有没有语法错误It's the third day that I haven't seen you.Do
拜托帮我看一下有没有语法错误
It's the third day that I haven't seen you.Do you know ,I miss you so much.But why can't see you?Only for your hair?I know,it's important for you .But in your heart,is it really more important than me I feel really very sad.
I don't want to lose you,and you are the person who is most important in my life .Although,besides of you,I have them,my best friends ,but I still need you.I really want to see you .I don't know how to survive the days without you being by my side.
And I even feel the hole world is changed.
Because of you,I throw myself .From now on,you will be the reasons for all happiness.
It's the third day that I haven't seen you.Do you know ,I miss you so much.But why can't see you?Only for your hair?I know,it's important for you .But in your heart,is it really more important than me I feel really very sad.
I don't want to lose you,and you are the person who is most important in my life .Although,besides of you,I have them,my best friends ,but I still need you.I really want to see you .I don't know how to survive the days without you being by my side.
And I even feel the hole world is changed.
Because of you,I throw myself .From now on,you will be the reasons for all happiness.
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It's the third day that I can't see you.Do you know that I miss you so much.I wonder why I can't see you?Only for your hair?I know it's important for you .But in your heart,is it really more important than me I feel really sad.
I don't want to lost you,and you are the most important person in my life .Although I have someone else-my best friends ,I still need you.I really want to see you .I don't know how to survive the days without you .
And I even feel the whole world is changing.
Because of you,I lost myself .From now on,you will be the only reason for all happiness.
你的有点中国式英语,大概改了一下.
I don't want to lost you,and you are the most important person in my life .Although I have someone else-my best friends ,I still need you.I really want to see you .I don't know how to survive the days without you .
And I even feel the whole world is changing.
Because of you,I lost myself .From now on,you will be the only reason for all happiness.
你的有点中国式英语,大概改了一下.
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