英文写作修改Claim:We can usually learn much more from people whose

Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views we disagree with.
Reason: Disagreeement can cause stress, which in turn, can have a negative impact on learning.
The claim says we can usually learn much from people whose views we share than from those whose views we disagree with. Groups which have a common goal are more likely to succeed than those which have conflicting goals. Groups with a common goal tend to be more united, and members within such groups also tend to encourage each other more and are thus motivated to do better. LIkewiseo, in these groups, efforts of individual members are more likely to be acknowledged and appreciated by other members, which would in turn make individual members to believe in himself/herself, and thus are likely to succeed.
我觉得你的阐述与你的claim有点文不对题.
In fact, every one needs other people admit them and share views elywith them. In contrast, if someone can not feel any love or support, he may not become smarter, and even dull
However,in some case it may not hold true. We sometimes learn more from people who disagrees with us. Thinking about the World War, people fought with each other, though it ruined peace, it can’t be denied that society developed faster due to competition. Nowadays, intellctual proverty is preserved as we demand creative new ideas,which explains in what degree does disagree works. Even if disagreement exists, it doesn’t mean that it inhibits learning. Disagreement sometimes can improve one’s learning ability, also dilemma and pressure can improve one’s resilience. At least we could learn about tolerance and understanding from people who opposite us. There’s always something to learn. What’s more, tolerance of different ideas create a good environment for us to learn.
All in all, we should learn how to study in this technological world. Whether we agree with each other, we must walk across that barrier and continue our curiosity and our desire to learn. For those who support our views, we can get confidence and work together to learn. For those who disagree with us, we should sit down and communicate with others, maybe we will find a better way and learn more. If you want to learn, nothing can stop yourself. Rather than discussing whether disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning, we can keep calm and think about how to learn.