短文改错.The day before yesterday,my classmates and me went to t

短文改错.
The day before yesterday,my classmates and me went to the park near my school.Can you guess that what we did there?Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.They reached the park at nine o'clock.The whole class divided into three groups.Group One planted trees and watered flowers.Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches.The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground.All of us worked hardly.Before noon we finished working.Each of us fell a little bit tired,so we were happy because we had done a good deed.
晕了,这百度。went to the park near school..Before noon we finished working.Group Two was told to pic k up litter leaving by the tourists and clea ned all the benches
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潜意识的爱 幼苗

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The day before yesterday,my classmates and me(要用 I) went to the park near my (our) school.Can you guess(去掉 that) what we did there?Not for amusement but (to take 改为 took) part in a volunteer labour.They(应该是 We) reached the park at nine o'clock.The whole class divided into three groups.Group One planted trees and watered flowers.Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving (过去式要用 left)by the tourists and cleaned all the benches.The group (where 改为 which) I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground.All of us worked (hardly 改为 very hard).Before noon we finished working.Each of us fell (是 felt)a little bit tired,(so应该是 but) we were happy because we had done a good deed.
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好像没全对。。。

举报 潜意识的爱

似看不出还有甚麼地方有错? 你可以指出来吗?

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嗯哼,那个to take 应该是对的吧。before noon we finished working.这里o(╯□╰)o

举报 潜意识的爱

我把to to take 改为 took 是因为你的句子Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.没有动词。 before noon we finished working 可改为: We had all finished our work before noon. 会好一些。

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