大家帮我看看这个自我介绍怎么修改,感激不尽~
大家帮我看看这个自我介绍怎么修改,感激不尽~
考研英语复试自我介绍
Good morning.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Mafei,I am thirty-three years old.I come from Xingtai city of Hebei Province.I graduated from HanDan Medical College in July,2001.I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital.In the past one year I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I’ve been working in a hospital as doctor.And the ten years of work experience let me know that I need to promote myself by the Stage of postgraduate study.
Like most of the Hebeipeople,I am a straightforward person.In my spare time,I like reading books and lisiting music.I am a diligent student during my college studying ,and In my college,I actively response to the call of the college,take part in all kinds of useful activities.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.Of course,if I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,I will stare to effort to master a good command of advance my capability.
Mount Taihang is the most famous tourist attractions in Hebei Province,each year many people across the country come here to play,Xingtai located in the southern of Hebei Province,The scientist.Guoshoujing’s hometown
Ten years of work experience let me know that,I need Stage of postgraduate study to promote myself.Because the kownledge I have owned can’t meet my needs.
In 2001.I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital,Then in2009,I got an opportunity to take advanced study in the Department of Neurology of Xingtai People’s Hospital again.Now,I am working in the Secondary Hospital of Renxian.With the accumulation of experience,I can independently deal with the common disease,the treatment of common emergency and serious disease.
My father and my mather are peasant,and they are all diligent.I love my family I love my father and mother.
As time fling,I find I need enriching myself.In order to achieve my goal,I try my best.So,I am here.It will be my great honor to take part in the re-interview.I cherish the opportunity very much.If I become a student of your college,I will work harder and try my best to make contributions to the development of Medical work.Thank you!
考研英语复试自我介绍
Good morning.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Mafei,I am thirty-three years old.I come from Xingtai city of Hebei Province.I graduated from HanDan Medical College in July,2001.I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital.In the past one year I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I’ve been working in a hospital as doctor.And the ten years of work experience let me know that I need to promote myself by the Stage of postgraduate study.
Like most of the Hebeipeople,I am a straightforward person.In my spare time,I like reading books and lisiting music.I am a diligent student during my college studying ,and In my college,I actively response to the call of the college,take part in all kinds of useful activities.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.Of course,if I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,I will stare to effort to master a good command of advance my capability.
Mount Taihang is the most famous tourist attractions in Hebei Province,each year many people across the country come here to play,Xingtai located in the southern of Hebei Province,The scientist.Guoshoujing’s hometown
Ten years of work experience let me know that,I need Stage of postgraduate study to promote myself.Because the kownledge I have owned can’t meet my needs.
In 2001.I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital,Then in2009,I got an opportunity to take advanced study in the Department of Neurology of Xingtai People’s Hospital again.Now,I am working in the Secondary Hospital of Renxian.With the accumulation of experience,I can independently deal with the common disease,the treatment of common emergency and serious disease.
My father and my mather are peasant,and they are all diligent.I love my family I love my father and mother.
As time fling,I find I need enriching myself.In order to achieve my goal,I try my best.So,I am here.It will be my great honor to take part in the re-interview.I cherish the opportunity very much.If I become a student of your college,I will work harder and try my best to make contributions to the development of Medical work.Thank you!
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Good morning (everyone)!I am (honored) to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Mafei.I am thirty-three years old.I come from (Xingtai,Hebei).I graduated from HanDan Medical College in July,2001.[I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital.][这句话的意义是什么?因为放在这里前不承后不接] In the past year,I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I’ve been working in a hospital as a doctor.Ten years of work experience (told me) what I need to promote myself by the stage of postgraduate study.
Like most of the (people from Hebei),I am a straightforward person.In my spare time,I like reading books and lisiting music.I (was) a diligent student during my college (years).(For example),I actively responded to the call of the college (by participating) in all kinds of useful activities.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps learning.Of course,if I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,[I will stare to effort to master a good command of advance my capability].[完全不通顺,如果你的意思是“我会努力发挥我的能力”,那就应该是 I will try the best to develop and use my abilities].
Mount Taihang is the most famous (view spot for tourists) in Hebei Province.Each year (a lot of) people across the country come here (for vacation).Xingtai is located in southern Hebei Province,where is the home town of the scientist Guoshoujing.
Ten years of work experience let me know that,I need the postgraduate study to promote myself,because the kownledge I have (now) can’t meet my needs.[和第一段重复了]
In 2001.I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital,In 2009,I got an opportunity to take advanced study in the Department of Neurology of Xingtai People’s Hospital again.Now,I am working in the Secondary Hospital of Renxian.With the accumulation of experience,I can independently deal with common diseases,treatment of common emergencies and serious diseases.
My (parents) are (farmers who are all diligent people).I love my family.
As time (flies),I (realized that I need to enrich) myself.In order to achieve my goal,I (will) try my best.Therefore I am here.It will be my great honor to (have a chance for the second interview).I (appreciate) the opportunity very much.If I (get accepted into this college),I will work harder and try (better) to make contributions to the development of Medical work.Thank you!
PS:如果这是考研面试时候你要说的话.我觉得你还是再花点心思吧.
Like most of the (people from Hebei),I am a straightforward person.In my spare time,I like reading books and lisiting music.I (was) a diligent student during my college (years).(For example),I actively responded to the call of the college (by participating) in all kinds of useful activities.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps learning.Of course,if I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,[I will stare to effort to master a good command of advance my capability].[完全不通顺,如果你的意思是“我会努力发挥我的能力”,那就应该是 I will try the best to develop and use my abilities].
Mount Taihang is the most famous (view spot for tourists) in Hebei Province.Each year (a lot of) people across the country come here (for vacation).Xingtai is located in southern Hebei Province,where is the home town of the scientist Guoshoujing.
Ten years of work experience let me know that,I need the postgraduate study to promote myself,because the kownledge I have (now) can’t meet my needs.[和第一段重复了]
In 2001.I went on a field trip to Xingtai People’s Hospital,In 2009,I got an opportunity to take advanced study in the Department of Neurology of Xingtai People’s Hospital again.Now,I am working in the Secondary Hospital of Renxian.With the accumulation of experience,I can independently deal with common diseases,treatment of common emergencies and serious diseases.
My (parents) are (farmers who are all diligent people).I love my family.
As time (flies),I (realized that I need to enrich) myself.In order to achieve my goal,I (will) try my best.Therefore I am here.It will be my great honor to (have a chance for the second interview).I (appreciate) the opportunity very much.If I (get accepted into this college),I will work harder and try (better) to make contributions to the development of Medical work.Thank you!
PS:如果这是考研面试时候你要说的话.我觉得你还是再花点心思吧.
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