帮我看看我的自我介绍 错误请您帮我指出
帮我看看我的自我介绍 错误请您帮我指出
good afternoon everyone.my name is xx.my hometown is liaoning ,haicheng where zhang xue liang was born.
i come from society university.i have done many different jobs.i worked as a hotel .and so on.
fortunately,i had been working in xx company as xx for 4 years.as the time goes by,i begin to realize the valve of life is to endeavor without stopping.
sport is my gift,is my destiny.
thanks for giving mt this opportunity to shand here.All good things must come to an end.the time of two years will soon pass by.i would like to take this chance to wish all of you enjoying good health and having success at school.
good afternoon everyone.my name is xx.my hometown is liaoning ,haicheng where zhang xue liang was born.
i come from society university.i have done many different jobs.i worked as a hotel .and so on.
fortunately,i had been working in xx company as xx for 4 years.as the time goes by,i begin to realize the valve of life is to endeavor without stopping.
sport is my gift,is my destiny.
thanks for giving mt this opportunity to shand here.All good things must come to an end.the time of two years will soon pass by.i would like to take this chance to wish all of you enjoying good health and having success at school.
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Good afternoon,everybody.
My name is xx.My hometown is Haicheng Liaoning province,where zhang Xueliang was born.
I come from society university.I have had many different jobs.I once worked in a hotel .and so on.
Fortunately,I had been working in xx company as xx for 4 years.As the time flies,I begin to realize that the valve of life is to endeavor without settling.
Sport is my gift,is my destination.
Thanks for giving me this opportunity to stand here.All good things may come to an end.The time of two years will soon pass by so I would like to take this chance to wish all of you good health and success at school.
My name is xx.My hometown is Haicheng Liaoning province,where zhang Xueliang was born.
I come from society university.I have had many different jobs.I once worked in a hotel .and so on.
Fortunately,I had been working in xx company as xx for 4 years.As the time flies,I begin to realize that the valve of life is to endeavor without settling.
Sport is my gift,is my destination.
Thanks for giving me this opportunity to stand here.All good things may come to an end.The time of two years will soon pass by so I would like to take this chance to wish all of you good health and success at school.
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