英语短文改错,十处错误,麻烦朋友们了,

英语短文改错,十处错误,麻烦朋友们了,
When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.It is not a CD player or a cell phone.It is the view outside my window.I am lucky live near a park.My window faces with the tops of the trees in the park.Below the trees I can see child on the playground,young couples walked quietly,mothers playing with children,and old people sitting on the benches.The all world seems to be before their eyes.My classmates like to surf the Internet or listen to music,but when I have a free time,I just sit in my room and enjoyed the most precious thing alone:the view.