英语短文改错,十处!On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myse
英语短文改错,十处!
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thingking of making a trip to London,and visit the British Museum and some parks.But I have spent most money,so I cannot even go out town.I may go to a film,or a concert.Yes,a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music.So then,a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music,I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.If I listen to my own records,there are no need to spend money.All right .That`s what I`m going to do.
最好是有注解呢~没有也没关系!
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thingking of making a trip to London,and visit the British Museum and some parks.But I have spent most money,so I cannot even go out town.I may go to a film,or a concert.Yes,a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music.So then,a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music,I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.If I listen to my own records,there are no need to spend money.All right .That`s what I`m going to do.
最好是有注解呢~没有也没关系!
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On Thursday I will（去掉will） have to decide what I want myself（删除） to do over a（改成the） weekend.I am thingking of making a trip to London,and visit（改成visiting） the British Museum and some parks.But I have spent most money,so I cannot even go out（加上of） town.I may go to a film,or a concert.Yes,a concert can be very excited（改成exciting）.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music.So（改成But） then,a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music,I have some records（加上that were） giving（改成gived） to me as birthday gifts.If I listen to my own records,there are（改成is） no need to spend money.All right .That`s what I`m going to do.
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