英语达人,修改文章My DreamEveryone has a lot of dreams. Some people w

英语达人,修改文章
My Dream
Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot of dreams,too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist in future. However, after years, my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese. It will be so great that I can convey the mother language I am speak and the culture I grow up in. So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
During my study in the college, I make great efforts to learn English and Chinese culture. Although it is very difficult, I never give up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language. Now I have made great progress. As long as I focus on your dream and try really hard, I believe it will come true.
我才上初一,很不实际,请帮我原文修改,再长一点,如果有有问题的句子也修改一下!我会给50~100分的!拜托了