请检查这两句话是否有错误!I usually bring happiness and laughter everywhe

请检查这两句话是否有错误!
I usually bring happiness and laughter everywhere I go.I have strong ambitions and I'm pretty confident.I’m going to win with my smiling.
快板慢拍 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

心情游客 幼苗

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i think you should end your sentence with "smile" instead of "smiling"
also,"ambition" is an uncountable noun,youd better use "ambition"

1年前

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justliuyu 幼苗

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ambitions?
我认为只有这里有点问题,"雄心野心"应该不是可数名词,所以我认为不能加s.

1年前

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