请前辈 纠正一段英文语法 ,Leona：你发的哪组照片,我最喜欢的是第3张,有点像被渲染过的中国水墨画,而且很有层次.根

请前辈 纠正一段英文语法 ,
Leona：
你发的哪组照片,我最喜欢的是第3张,有点像被渲染过的中国水墨画,而且很有层次.
根据24那张推测,你们住的应该是海边的假日酒店吧?那些白色的珊瑚很漂亮,我想用来点缀你的新居是不错的选择.
13号那张,那个掩映于eroer球网背后大腹便便的女士不会是你吧?这很容易让人怀疑你是未婚先孕?
（我的英文不是很好,请前辈纠正语法,或者用一个更好的句式表述,）
Leona：
Among the group of photos you have sent to me ,my favorite is the third,which was playing up a bit like a Chinese ink painting and very level.
Basing on the No.24 ,I think you should have been living in the Holiday Inn on the beach during the trip .Those beautiful white coral,which I considered,would be a great embellishment of your new home.
In the picture of the 13th,the potbellied girl wearing a big red hat behind the eroer ball net ,could it be you?It easily causes people to guess that you were pregnant before wedding?
前辈：
看完了多了几个疑问
1、sent me 还是 sent to me？
2、我觉得I most like the third one 比my favorite one is the third one或I like the third one the best 要顺口，哪个更好？
3、表述 “云雾有层次感”应该用 has very clear layers还是presents a great hiberarchy？
4、这里应该用stay in 还是 stay at？
5、I guess you were staying 还是 I think you must have been staying