请英文高手进来帮我纠正语法错误,我知道很多,但是拜托你们了.

Secondly,children usually feel lonely when parents are not at home.Day by day,it might cause some mental problems and I suggest that children should meet more friends.On one hand,children can get rid of feeling lonely by communicating with their friends.On the other hand,friends can take the place of parents to some extent.A person’s friends can always give him an encouragement when he feel upset and keep him away from irrational actions.The most important thing is that a person’s friends can always be with the person and talk to the person to guide him into a positive mood.Lastly,having more hobbies is also worthy trying.Children can have fun in playing sports or some other creative activities.Moreover,hobbies can lead children to feel fulfilled about their life.Therefore,it might have some good influences on children.
我通篇改了,错误就不一一说了,最后一句的“it”我不明白指代什么