初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!9
初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!9
Tom is a bread cook.One mouth ago he open a bread shop in the street.His business is good.But one things let him be worry.
His pie in the shop often was stealed by a big fat cat.The cat came to the Tom'shop everday.Sometime Tom used a pan beat the cat,but he never succeed.Now Tom is not anger.That big fat cat is certainly like his food.So he also think his dishes is great.
He put a bluebarry pie in his shop door,wait the cat to eat.
错误很多,希望大家不吝指正.
语序,语法上有什么错误呢?
Tom is a bread cook.One mouth ago he open a bread shop in the street.His business is good.But one things let him be worry.
His pie in the shop often was stealed by a big fat cat.The cat came to the Tom'shop everday.Sometime Tom used a pan beat the cat,but he never succeed.Now Tom is not anger.That big fat cat is certainly like his food.So he also think his dishes is great.
He put a bluebarry pie in his shop door,wait the cat to eat.
错误很多,希望大家不吝指正.
语序,语法上有什么错误呢?
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aker面包师,没有bread cook一说...open加ed
his business is good 太中式英文了,改成the shop is very popular
things去掉s
let him worry那句改成but there was one thing he always worried about
stealed改为stolen
beat改为to drive away the cat
succeed加ed
anger改为angry
certainly前面那个is去掉,like改为likes
think加s
in his shop door改成infront of his shop door
后面那句改成waiting the cat to eat it
his business is good 太中式英文了,改成the shop is very popular
things去掉s
let him worry那句改成but there was one thing he always worried about
stealed改为stolen
beat改为to drive away the cat
succeed加ed
anger改为angry
certainly前面那个is去掉,like改为likes
think加s
in his shop door改成infront of his shop door
后面那句改成waiting the cat to eat it
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