xiuwei03112
幼苗
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Dear James
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice oh how to learn geography well.(asking用的不一定对,象这种不确定的可以拆成两个句子:I'm glad to receive your letter.You asked me for my advice on hwo to learn geography well.还有,on成了oh)
Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to remember map(建议用复数maps),anywhere you must be recognize it when you see the map.(改成you must recognize the place when you see the map.不要anywhere) Then remember(动词作主语要用动名词remembering)textbook about human geography's knowledge is very important.(改为remembering knowledge about human geography is very important.更加通顺)
Beside(是besides),it should be a good idea is(is改to) do geography's homework.(最好把should改may,提建议要委婉点)
You can ask teather questions when you have some problem(用复数problems).They will tell you a lot about knowledge(删去about,tell后面可以直接加名词,不需要介词),and help you study well.
Write me soon.(加介词to Write to me soon.最好加please客气一点)
Best wishes!
Cyril
1年前
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