高考英语作文请评分题目:My teachers(以下为我写的) 不算概括20分满分 请评分要求:(1)教师节迎来,表达你

高考英语作文请评分
题目:My teachers(以下为我写的) 不算概括20分满分 请评分
要求:(1)教师节迎来,表达你对老师的贺词
(2)你老师帮助你的一次经历
(3)120字左右
My teachers are the harbour of my soul and the oasis of my heart,who safeguarded me whenever something bad happened and emboldened me when I was discouraged.It was my teachers who lightened my heart and lent their hands to me when I was drowned in setbacks .
Memory has never faded out in my mind.Time flashed back to a day when I lagged behind others in math.It was my teachers who wiped off my puzzle in math and encouraged me without any hesitation.As a result,I made great progress.
From my perspectives,words fail to convey my gratitude to my teachers.Were it not for them,I would not be what I am today.My dearest teachers ,if you are the light,I will be the shdow.I'll make you see the seeds you pick up blossom.
不再存在的东山区 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

b2ayaaa4 幼苗

共回答了22个问题采纳率:81.8% 举报

如果你真的是高中生的高考作文,我只能说打19分了,你的词汇运用和描写已经超过六级水平了。恭喜你

1年前

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批熊 幼苗

共回答了19个问题采纳率:78.9% 举报

20分,写的很棒,完全是书面语言。

1年前

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