TYLZG
幼苗
共回答了4个问题 举报
梦想之眼泪的 translation is okay
but we'd better modify it
in the third line,no"letter",
put "the"just before"brother"
change "place"into "places",change "wo"into "we" in the fourth line and cross"but"
i don't know what "scence"is(are you sure the spelling is right)
1年前
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