神算书生
幼苗
共回答了22个问题采纳率:95.5% 举报
1.That document is urgent,so you should do it first.
或者 That document was urgent,so you should have done it first.
得看你想要表达的是什么意思什么时态了.
2.When I was trying to avoid the turch,I forgot that (别漏了that) the other side was a bus station.
(貌似没有turch这词,你要表达的是什么?)
3.Even though (分开写,是两个单词) the machine is very accurate,it still makes some mistakes.(mistakes用复数,另外用make mistakes)
4.Even though the sailor has a life jacket,the water is just extremely cold.
(life jacket前边加"a",另外extreme改成extremely)
5.We saw that the ambassador was walking on the street,but we didn't see his body guard.
(the ambassador跟在that后面,in the street改成on the street)
6.Last night,I dreamed of having a very odd experience in hollywood.(不用过去进行时,因为没有明确的时间点.用dream of,意思是梦到了什么)
7.You should be careful about the liquid which was put in the glass because it is vitriol.
(care for是照顾的意思,改成careful.be careful是小心的意思.另外我想你要表达的是glass,不是grass吧?)
8.Omar asked for a trap from Steve,but Steve didn't agree to that.(用asked for,意思是向某人要什么东西)
9.An efficient worker will make more money than one who doesn't do their work very well.
efficiency ->efficient,形容词形式
make money more than...改成 make more money than...
the worker可以直接用one来代替
10.最后一句没错.
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