麻烦英语改下语法错误~When I was a little girl,I always have many dream

When I was a little girl,I always have many dreams.Today I want to be a teacher,tomorrow maybe a singer..But one day,when I was watching tv,I saw a television representor talking about different countries in english fluently from the travel channel,a voice came into my ear at that time,”Wow,that’s turely what l want!”Therefore,now I’m standing here,and trying my best to make my dream come ture.I hope you can understand the meaning of my dream and give me a chance.Thank you!
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When I was a little girl,I always had many dreams.Maybe at one moment, I wanted to be a tracher,but in the next day,I preferred to be a singer.Then one day,when I saw the anchor of a t...

When I was a little girl,I always have many dreams.Today I want to be a teacher,tomorrow maybe a singer..But one day,when I was watching tv,I saw a Vj talkeing about different countries in english flu...

When I was a little girl,I always had many dreams.Today I wanted to be a teacher,tomorrow might be a singer. But one day when I was watching tv,I saw a TV host talking about different countries in eng...

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When I was a little girl,I always had many dreams.Today I want to be a teacher,but tomorrow maybe a singer.Still another day, maybe when I was watching tv,I saw a TV ho...