请英语高手帮我点评这篇作文.1 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3以自己为例What E

请英语高手帮我点评这篇作文.
1 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课
3以自己为例
What Electives to Choose
With the developing of the society,the students need to develop themselves in every aspect,In order to let the students fit into the world more quickly,every college has opened all kinds of electives for students.According to the survey,we know that 90% students are agreed with the college to opened the electives for them to choose.The students choose different electives because of all kinds of reasons.Some may choose exercise class because they like sports.In order to improve their handwriting,some may choose calligraphy class.Students may also choose dance class and so on.According to different students'interest,they can choose different electives.But on the other hand,sometimesyou may choose the elective which you don't like.Each elective ask for limited students so sometimes you might lose the chance.
Now,I'm a Grade 2 student at college,and I have choose my elective two times.Because there were so many people to choose the elective at the same time,I miss the elective which I interest in at that two times.But no matter what elective we choose,if we try our best to it ,wo can also learn a lot of knowledge.