看看我的提纲这样写行不行,有没有病句,帮我修改一下,

看看我的提纲这样写行不行,有没有病句,帮我修改一下,
Essay plan
Paragraph 1
TS:The widely use of the network.
SS1:Some school have already got involved in distance learning.
SS2:Online shop is becoming more and more popular.
SS3:It is an important way for us to get knowledge.
Paragraph 2
TS:The problems brought to us by the network.
SS1:Many children indulge in excessive network
SS2:People rely on Internet too much.
SS3:Hackers will cause troubles to the Internet even the people's life.
Paragraph 3
TS:The devolvement of the Internet.
SS1:Internet is a way of entertainment for us.
SS2:More and more people will study computing to do more things.
SS3:The network will bring the great benefit to us.