高一英语改错My mother worked like a doctor in our small town and s
高一英语改错
My mother worked like a doctor in our small town and she had always been busy.I remember that when I was still a child,Mother was so busy as she had no much time to take care of me.Inthe past I hated her very much,but I come to realizing how important her work is to others."Dear Mother,"I wrote,"I am very proud of having so a great mother.I believe in that you love me though you've never said so."
My mother worked like a doctor in our small town and she had always been busy.I remember that when I was still a child,Mother was so busy as she had no much time to take care of me.Inthe past I hated her very much,but I come to realizing how important her work is to others."Dear Mother,"I wrote,"I am very proud of having so a great mother.I believe in that you love me though you've never said so."
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she had always been busy改成she was always busy.and前后时态要统一.
Mother was so busy as she had no much time to take care of me中的as改成that.so...that...如此……以致
In the past 加time
but I come to realizing 改成but I've come to realize.前面,强调对现在的影响,用现在进行时.后面,to接动词原形.
so a great mother改成such a great mother.名词前面用such.
I believe in that you love me though you've never said so.去掉in,believe in表示宗教上的信仰,或表示信念.
Mother was so busy as she had no much time to take care of me中的as改成that.so...that...如此……以致
In the past 加time
but I come to realizing 改成but I've come to realize.前面,强调对现在的影响,用现在进行时.后面,to接动词原形.
so a great mother改成such a great mother.名词前面用such.
I believe in that you love me though you've never said so.去掉in,believe in表示宗教上的信仰,或表示信念.
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