希望好心人帮我看一下这篇英语短文的错误
希望好心人帮我看一下这篇英语短文的错误
今天我演讲的题目是我的英雄
The topic of my speech today is my hero
我认为我的英雄是霍金
I think my hero is Hocking
俗话说,人应该找一个能弥补自己缺点的英雄
As the saying goes,people should find a can make up for the shortcomings of their own hero
这样才会拥有前进的方向
This will have the direction
我是一个缺少自制力的人,每次都抵挡不住诱惑,而放弃了学习.但霍金却有强大的自制力,残疾后没有自暴自弃,而是努力奋发,成为一个著名的科学家
I am a lack of self-control,always cannot resist the temptation,and learn to give up.But Hocking still has the self-control and strong,did not give up on themselves disabled,but worked hard,at last he become a famous scientist
在大学期间,疾病没有把他打倒,他坚持研究,最后他成为一个巨人
In university period,disease did not knock him out,he insisted on,he finally became a giant
他是一个肉体上的弱者,但他是精神上的强者
He is a physically weak,but he is the spirit of the strong
他的执着,坚强,勇敢值得我们去学习
His dedication,strong,brave and worthy of our study
这就是我心中的的英雄,
This is my hero,
我一定会向他学习
I will learn from him
今天我演讲的题目是我的英雄
The topic of my speech today is my hero
我认为我的英雄是霍金
I think my hero is Hocking
俗话说,人应该找一个能弥补自己缺点的英雄
As the saying goes,people should find a can make up for the shortcomings of their own hero
这样才会拥有前进的方向
This will have the direction
我是一个缺少自制力的人,每次都抵挡不住诱惑,而放弃了学习.但霍金却有强大的自制力,残疾后没有自暴自弃,而是努力奋发,成为一个著名的科学家
I am a lack of self-control,always cannot resist the temptation,and learn to give up.But Hocking still has the self-control and strong,did not give up on themselves disabled,but worked hard,at last he become a famous scientist
在大学期间,疾病没有把他打倒,他坚持研究,最后他成为一个巨人
In university period,disease did not knock him out,he insisted on,he finally became a giant
他是一个肉体上的弱者,但他是精神上的强者
He is a physically weak,but he is the spirit of the strong
他的执着,坚强,勇敢值得我们去学习
His dedication,strong,brave and worthy of our study
这就是我心中的的英雄,
This is my hero,
我一定会向他学习
I will learn from him
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这全是机器翻译的吧. 下面是我自己改的,Today, my topic is my hero. My hero is Hocking. As the saying goes, people should find a hero who can make up for his own shortcomings. And the direction to move forward is clear and firm.
My self-control is bad. I always cannot resist the temptation, and give up learning. But Hocking has better self-control. Although he is disabled, he did not give up himself and worked hard. At last ,he become a famous scientist. In university, illness never stoped him. He still persevered in his research. He finally became a giant. 就改这些了,下面的你自己改改吧.
My self-control is bad. I always cannot resist the temptation, and give up learning. But Hocking has better self-control. Although he is disabled, he did not give up himself and worked hard. At last ,he become a famous scientist. In university, illness never stoped him. He still persevered in his research. He finally became a giant. 就改这些了,下面的你自己改改吧.
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