英语短文改错1.One watches TV often feels that whatever happened in
英语短文改错
1.One watches TV often feels that whatever happened in the
2.film could well happen to him.jane had enjoyed a film in
3.which a young girl had followed and murdered.Now she
4.was walking to the station,feel a little frightened.she took the
5.train back to the center of the city,where there were a lot people,so she felt much safe.She thought of nothing until found
6.a man near staring at her.Feeling very uncomfortable,she got
7.out of the train and went to the bus stop.After getting off,hears
8.footsteps behind her but didn't dare to turn round when she
9.a hand on her shoulder and heard a pleasure voice,
10."I'd apologize if I frightened you.I'm your neighbour.I thought I recognize you in the train ,but I'm not sure."
1.One watches TV often feels that whatever happened in the
2.film could well happen to him.jane had enjoyed a film in
3.which a young girl had followed and murdered.Now she
4.was walking to the station,feel a little frightened.she took the
5.train back to the center of the city,where there were a lot people,so she felt much safe.She thought of nothing until found
6.a man near staring at her.Feeling very uncomfortable,she got
7.out of the train and went to the bus stop.After getting off,hears
8.footsteps behind her but didn't dare to turn round when she
9.a hand on her shoulder and heard a pleasure voice,
10."I'd apologize if I frightened you.I'm your neighbour.I thought I recognize you in the train ,but I'm not sure."
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watches--watching 一个句子里不能有两个动词,这句话里动词是Feel,watch必须以动名词形式出现,修饰One
him--or her 前面的One既指代男性也指代女性,所以应添上or her
had followed-had been followed 女孩是被跟踪了,应用被动式
feel--feeling 和第一句一样,这里也只能有一个动词,feeling是ing形式修饰动作
safe-safer 句意是她感觉安全多了,much后加比较级,表示.多了
near--nearby nearby是副词,表示“在……旁边”.
hears--she hears 必须有主语
she--she felt 怎么能没动词呢?
pleasure--pleasant 悦耳的声音,pleasure是名词
recognize--recognized 应用过去时
him--or her 前面的One既指代男性也指代女性,所以应添上or her
had followed-had been followed 女孩是被跟踪了,应用被动式
feel--feeling 和第一句一样,这里也只能有一个动词,feeling是ing形式修饰动作
safe-safer 句意是她感觉安全多了,much后加比较级,表示.多了
near--nearby nearby是副词,表示“在……旁边”.
hears--she hears 必须有主语
she--she felt 怎么能没动词呢?
pleasure--pleasant 悦耳的声音,pleasure是名词
recognize--recognized 应用过去时
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1.watches--watching/who watches
2.correct
3.had been followed
4.feel---feeling
5.a lot---a lot of (found---she found?)
6.near---nearby
7.hears---she heard
8.she---she felt
9.pleasure---pleasant
10.recognized
2.correct
3.had been followed
4.feel---feeling
5.a lot---a lot of (found---she found?)
6.near---nearby
7.hears---she heard
8.she---she felt
9.pleasure---pleasant
10.recognized
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