帮我看看这段英文有没有错It tells the story of Alice who was 20 years old
帮我看看这段英文有没有错
It tells the story of Alice who was 20 years old.One day she went to a party with her mother.But she found that she was proposed in front of many people who were arrogant suitors.Suddenly a white rabbit came into her view ,she followed it to a cave then fell into fairyland.13 years ago,Alice had been to this place ,but she didn’t remember it .Here ,Alice and those lovely old friends meet again:the White Queen and two brothers ,caterpillars and so on.The wonderful adventures in Wonderland help Alice to learn a sense of great important mission that is to lead the inhabitants to end the Queen’s evil control of the world and make the paradise become peaceful.x0b
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It tells the story of Alice who was 20 years old.One day she went to a party with her mother.But she found that she was proposed in front of many people who were arrogant suitors.Suddenly a white rabbit came into her view ,she followed it to a cave then fell into fairyland.13 years ago,Alice had been to this place ,but she didn’t remember it .Here ,Alice and those lovely old friends meet again:the White Queen and two brothers ,caterpillars and so on.The wonderful adventures in Wonderland help Alice to learn a sense of great important mission that is to lead the inhabitants to end the Queen’s evil control of the world and make the paradise become peaceful.x0b
有语法错误的指出并改正,
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个人觉得 but she didn't remember it 中 didn't 有点问题 因为她不记得是现在的事情，不应该用过去式吧，应该是doesn't 呵呵，英语不好，只觉得这里有毛病，个人意见不代表对啊，请自行斟酌，总体看着是高中英语课文，死板的套句式，强调伴随状语和定语从句，翻译过来挺别扭的 ，你就自己看看时态有没有用错，动词有没有重复，定语从句对没对...
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