急！哪位大神帮我改一下这个英语作文模板，我不想和别人写的雷同。谢谢！！！

急！哪位大神帮我改一下这个英语作文模板，我不想和别人写的雷同。谢谢！！！
第一段
Drawing is a peep under the truth.---Charles Wirgrman.What the painter subtly intends to reflect to us carries a major significance:主旨。 第二段 As is animatedly portrayed,描写图画或图表.Simple as the drawer seems to be，the intended meaning goes for deeper.Indeed,it carries a thought-provoking reality：消极主题/it，though，may be obscuring an unrecognized reality：nothing can compared with积极主题.第三段（贬义）First,主题endangers our spiritual and material needs.Not only that，but it also results in a morbid and apprehensive life.More importantly，主题，to some degree，hinders nation to realize “China dream”.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.Take a Survey of sociology which is my undergraduate major as a typical illustration，68.1% of adults who have ever experienced 主题 will live a stuffy life，which may make them feel loss of trust about the society.Judging from these factors above，some positive measures should be implemented.第四段（贬义) Life,I believe,ask a continuous serious of adjustments to reality.---Robert G Allman：A Ball to Roll Around.What should we do to prevent主题?The most imperative effort is that corresponding laws and relevant regulations be carried out to curb and harness this urgent problem/prohibit 主题.Only in this way can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.