housongtao
幼苗
共回答了19个问题采纳率:100% 举报
1,He left many scars from the army.是说为战争留下伤痕.
改成 he has got scars from the army. ,
2,Now,one of the caves he dug in open to the tourists要用被动,洞是被开放的,用完成时比较好,强调影响.
改成 one of the caves he dug has been open to the tourists
3,He also have the studens all over the China.Some of them usually call him up.And some of them usually visit him.He is popular before,isn’t he?
studens 拼写错误,检查一下看别的地方是否都写正确了.
4,he persist
改成 persists 三人称单数加S
5,Her education isn’t very good
改成 she recieved lower education.
6,She is proud to draw or paint a beautiful picture
改成 She is fond of drawing or painting a beautiful picture
7,She usually shopping with my mother
改成 She usually go shopping with my mother.
8,He is not only a elder
改成 an elder
9,he usually tells me the most popular large games
改成 tell me how to play the most .
10,I have to play games about spiderman or superman everyday.
改成 I love playing games about.,
基本上挺好的,你这样的年龄能写出这样的文章已经很不错了,加油!文章中一些拼写和基本语法,按照我改写的再检查检查,祝好运、成功!
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