请帮忙分析下这句英语,谢谢!记者立即出发去核实这些重要的事实,但过了好长时间不见他把数字寄来,在此期间,编辑等得不耐烦了
请帮忙分析下这句英语,谢谢!
记者立即出发去核实这些重要的事实,但过了好长时间不见他把数字寄来,在此期间,编辑等得不耐烦了,因为杂志马上要印刷
The journalist set out immediately to check these important things,but he have didn’t give back this numbers with a long time when the editor was impatience for waiting because the magazines would soon go to press
这句英文翻译有错误吗?若有错在哪?并说明原因,谢谢。