下面英语句子是否正确?时态、语法、结构都对吗?还可以再改善吗?

下面英语句子是否正确?时态、语法、结构都对吗?还可以再改善吗?
Whydo you like collecting things? 你为什么喜欢收集东西呢?
I think if I once start, it’s really hard tostop.
I can learn a lot of knowledge and get to know some new friends.
I feel satisfied and collecting can fill up spare time.
小东西QQ 1年前 已收到1个回答 举报

Google测试员1477 幼苗

共回答了29个问题采纳率:93.1% 举报

你会用which之类的吗
比如最后一句i feel satisfied by collecting, which can also fill up my spare time
还有。and用太多了。这个词太低级了。不能用太多
第三句可以 i can learn a lot of knowledge as well as knowing some new friends.

1年前

3
可能相似的问题
Copyright © 2024 YULUCN.COM - 雨露学习互助 - 16 q. 0.020 s. - webmaster@yulucn.com