）有一篇关于西红柿炒鸡蛋过程的英文介绍,请大家看看.

Put the eggs in a bowl,use chopsticks to mix
the egg up.Then add the salt and some pepper powder.
put the egg into the pot,with a spatula gently rolling.And cut it into small pieces.
And then picked up the spare heat oil,add the tomatoes,sugar and water,cook
for 30 seconds.Put The eggs and chopped green
onions into the pot,and
stir fry for 30 seconds.Finally ,you can eat delicious tomatoes scrambled eggs
本人初二,给你改了下,可能有误.……中间你是不是有的用的在线翻译?!.
中间那句2 tablespoons of oil heat,into the egg,with a spatula gently rolling我实在没懂!就按我想的给你改了.

不用改，参加比赛难度合适，没什么语法错误，背熟就行

可以加一些first next then finally这些词

Firstly, put the eggs into a bowl and stir them with the chopsticks. Do remember to add some salt and pepper.
Secondly, heat 2 tablespoons of oil and pour in the eggs, then quickly but gently sti...

Firstly, put the eggs into a bowl and mixture them with the chopsticks. Do remember to add some salt and pepper powder.
Secondly, heat 2 tablespoons of oil and put the eggs in, then gently roll wi...