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1.B:Yes,go head.这个不是,改成go ahead.
2.A:How do you understand the word of the partners?这个建议用:How do you understand “partners”?
3.Can not two strangers be partners?Especially when they have the same target?不用分两句,Can not two strangers be partners,especially when they have the same target?
4.It means that if two people are unable to cooperate with each other well,even if they complete the target,they cannot be regarded as partners.这句,two people 改成 two persons
5.I think only friends can be called on partners!这句,你是不是想说被称作“搭档”呢?我觉得用上面相同的形式 can be regarded as partners 就可以了~要不就用can be called 应该是不用call on
6.only both they are excellect can the relationship of partners being continued.那个excellent拼错了,应该是想说他们很优秀是吧?还有就是 being 应该是用 be continued
7.so we always can't find a good partner as you want.这句感觉有点怪,因为前面用的是We 后面是you,觉得人称应该统一比较好一点,此外,as you want 一般用as you wish 好像比较多
8还有一个就是这句B:OK!As the old saying goes:a partner must be a good partner.It means that if two people are unable to cooperate with each other well,even if they complete the target,衔接处的OK有点奇怪~因为上面问的是不可以是陌生人吗?但是回答OK,然后说的是最好是能够很好配合的人,感觉用OK似乎不太好~不过这个只是个人意见啦~
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