各位英语大虾帮我评价一篇作文题目为你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南创北 考研作文 200字 关于合作1满分20我几分2
各位英语大虾帮我评价一篇作文
题目为你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南创北
考研作文 200字 关于合作
1满分20我几分
2有什么语法方面表达方面的错误谢谢各位
As is illustrated in the picture,two crippled people threw down their crutches and traveled around the world together.Accordingly,this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society:to make up for each other's deficiencies,the thing one cannot settle can be easily achieved by two-body cooperation.
There are several reasons accounting for the opinion above.To begin with,since we live in a modern city ,we may forget how to choose the best and the fittest way,where high-speed lifestyle make some of us lost ourselves.If things continue this way,we will encounter a huge amount of plights.At this moment,the eye of our friend is a bright mirror.Furthermore,to more extensively speak,not merely us,even the country’s progress rests on the national Financial trade.some Chinese leader puts that china cannot develop any more without being in the world.
Judging from what have argued above,we should not wean ourselves to cooperation.Specifically,we should take a positive attitude to helping others who is in dilemma.I believe in this way the relationship between people will be more harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in.