英语作文不太好,请英语好的给看一下作文,改改错
英语作文不太好,请英语好的给看一下作文,改改错
Everyone has shares something with others experience .I have too.
One day I was stay at home in order to do my homework ,my door was knocked ,when I finished my homework .I opened my door and find it’s my good friend kate,.I was very surprised and very happy .and I shared the book with her who’s named Alice in wonderland,it’s so interesting that I can’t forget it .we had a good time together
This things told me share is not only make us fell happy but also very important in our daily life
Everyone has shares something with others experience .I have too.
One day I was stay at home in order to do my homework ,my door was knocked ,when I finished my homework .I opened my door and find it’s my good friend kate,.I was very surprised and very happy .and I shared the book with her who’s named Alice in wonderland,it’s so interesting that I can’t forget it .we had a good time together
This things told me share is not only make us fell happy but also very important in our daily life
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Every one has shared experiences with others and i have too.
One day i was staying at home and doing my homework.My door was knocked while i'm doing my homework.When i opened my door,i found it was my good friend,Kate.i was very surprised and happy about it.we read a book together that was about Alice who lived in wonderland.it was an interesting book and we had a good time together.
It tells me that sharing staff with each other can make people feel happy and it's very important for our daily life
这只是语法问题,如有不懂可以问我
One day i was staying at home and doing my homework.My door was knocked while i'm doing my homework.When i opened my door,i found it was my good friend,Kate.i was very surprised and happy about it.we read a book together that was about Alice who lived in wonderland.it was an interesting book and we had a good time together.
It tells me that sharing staff with each other can make people feel happy and it's very important for our daily life
这只是语法问题,如有不懂可以问我
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