个人英语作文,有漏洞啊,请英语指出并纠正,

个人英语作文,有漏洞啊,请英语指出并纠正,
I'm very glad to hear you are interested in Chinese.Although i know you have some problems about learing Chinese,i believe clever you can slove them and get greater grades.
I can offer you a number of suggestions about how to learn Chinese better.(这句有点生硬,
All language are structured by vocabulary,so increasing vocabulary is the most important thing of learning chinese.I think it should be a good idea to accumulate vocabulary by listening tapes and the chinese channel of radio as well.
But this is only one side.Not only should we listen,but also write and read(这句话总感觉不对,我想表达的意思是学习英语不但要学会听,而且要学会读和写）
(高手这边加个句子吧,不然连承有点生硬）To write diary is a good method to improve your chinese.And it's helpful to read literary works of chinese loudly.If you have many time,you ought to speak and practice more whenever possible.
i hope you can learn better and better.
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