英语翻译，这两句翻的怎么样？有错误，求指出

第一句who后的is改为was
第二句也不算错，感觉不太地道。这样翻译是不是好些： The West Lake is surrounded by mountains on three sides, with a river winding its way around the city. People around the world are attracted by its charming natural scenary which looks like a facinating beauty, no matter how plainly or luxuriously she is dressed.