改错:on world reading day ,we went to the local library to ser

改错:on world reading day ,we went to the local library to serve as volunteers .
i'd like to telling you something the bad behaviors of some readers first ,
did't put the books where they are before reading also other people talk loudly
or even make phone calls in the libaries ,which greatly disturbs other reads.there are
also people who eat and drink while reading ,leaving rubbish on the desk though there are
dustbins nearby . what's more,notes are found in some books ,made it hard for others to read
.some pages are gone ,probable torn away by readers who find them useful. i hope all the people
coming to the libary behave themseleves while enjoying to reading,creating a better environment
for all the book love
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marsalian 幼苗

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On World Reading Day,we went to the local library to serve as volunteers.I’d like to tell you something about the bad behaviors of some readers.
  First,some readers don’t put the books where they were after reading.Also other people talk loudly or even make phone calls in the library,which greatly disturbs other readers.There are also people who eat and drink while reading,leaving rubbish on the table though there are dustbins nearby.What’s worse,notes are found in some books,making it hard for others to read.Some pages are gone,probably torn away by readers who find them useful.
  I hope all the people coming to the library behave themselves while enjoying reading,creating a better reading environment for all the book lovers.

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erh8 幼苗

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On world reading day telling 改 tell 不要something did't put the books前加主语some readers put the books where they should be also改成and disturbs other readers made it h...

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cobyyl 幼苗

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would like to+do,
some readers后+句号
didn't put 前+主语,可用some of them
enjoy+doing
还有,句子的第一个字母要大写,
全文的时态应一致,文中除didn't put外,都是用的一般现在时

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