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It says that Every heart has its own sorrow.for sure,when we was worn in the world ,so many frustrations and difficults had already got ready to test us out ,It is the unforeseen that always happens.traffic accident.Floodwater.Illness ,there are so many unforeseen things in our lives ,we always don’t know what will happen to us in the future ,even the next second..when we caught difficults wo yearn for others’ helps,others’ helps are so important to us that I can’t imagine life without them.
We also need others’ help in everyday life ,the other day ,I had a stomachache,I feel so suffering,my best friend give me a cup of hot water ,told me to have the medicine ,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day ,I was on duty) I couldn’t be thankful enough to her for her help.
All of above tells us one truth——people need other’ helps ,do you know volunteers,they are one of this kind of people who always do things for others ,but never asks for any reward,They does their work zealously and earnestly,They devote their whole life to people who are in trouble..they are ordinary people,but Their spirit makes them a hero in everyone’s harts,it influences everyone ,and reminds me to help others If someone asks me a question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will answer him without a scruple----volunteers,of course!