短文改错,请写出为什么错 .十个错误.

短文改错,请写出为什么错 .十个错误.
Yesterday,I go shopping in the supermarket.As I was looking at the goods I noticed an old man who was seemed to be following me where I went.As I moved,there he was,smiled at me.I wondered if I had done something wrong.But I didn't think I had.So,I believed if there must be something wrong with him.I became a bit scaring.At the food section I was selecting the chicken when I felt a tap on the shoulders.Turning around,I saw that it was same man."Lady," he finally said,"you have your shopping basket."At that moment Irealized I miaunderstood him,so I said sorry for him at once.
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Yesterday,I go(改为went)shopping in the supermarket.As I was looking at the goods I noticed an old man who was (去掉was)seemed to be following me where(改为wherever) I went.As I moved,there he was,smiled(改为smiling) at me.I wondered if I had done something wrong.But I didn't think I had.So,I believed if(改为that) there must be something wrong with him.I became a bit scaring(改为scared).At the food section I was selecting the(去掉the) chicken when I felt a tap on the shoulders(改为shoulder).Turning around,I saw that it was(加上the) same man."Lady," he finally said,"you have your shopping basket."At that moment Irealized I miaunderstood him,so I said sorry for(改为to) him at once.

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能不能给我解释一下为什么这么改. 明天我们老师要让我讲.可是我是个英语白痴...

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1go--went句子的时间是yesterday 2.was去掉是因为seem没被动式。 3。where--wherever无论走到哪里 4.smiled(改为smiling) 现在分词作伴随状语,因为前面无并列连词不用过去式 5.if(改为that) believed后只接that从句 6.scaring(改为scared). 因为改完的词意是感到害怕的 7.(去掉the)chicken不可数 8.shoulders(改为shoulder).只是拍了一个肩膀 9.加上the)因为same前一定要加定冠词 10say sorry to sb是固定结构

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能不能把4.5通俗一点给我讲一遍.谢谢.....
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