西高伦伦
幼苗
共回答了12个问题采纳率:100% 举报
1.,I learn about 改为I have learned about
2.I'd like to your penfriend 改为I'd like to be your penfriend
3.moreabout---more about
4.,let me tell you something more about ,去掉more,因为以前没有告诉过,不需要比较级.
5..I went to Hongqi Middle School,went改为go
6.We study quite a few subject改为subjects
7.I use to play ping-pong a lot 改为 I used to play ping-pong a lot
8.,but mow I am interesting in football改为,but now I am interested in football
9.I took forward to hear from you soon.改为I look forward to hearing from you soon.
1年前
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