短文改错 looked very brightly.My mother held

短文改错 looked very brightly.My mother held
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looked very brightly.My mother held my hand and we entered into a toy shop ,which was crowded with children.There were much nice toys everywhere.Then I saw Father Chrustmas himself I took my mother by the hand ."Please to take me to Father Christmas!"she said.There were msny children near Father Christmas.They were standing
in line.Fsther Christmas spoke every one of them.At last it was my turn."Hello,little Tom!"he said to me.Heard his voice,I voice,I found out that he was my uncle,John Smith
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gawkybear 幼苗

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第一行:brightly改为bright
第一行:entered改为went第二行:much改为many第三行:去掉Please后面的to第三行:she改为I
第五行:spoke后面加to第六行:Heard改为Hearing

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tanghappy 幼苗

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...looked very bright. My mother held my hand and we entered a toy shop ,which was crowded with children. There were many nice toys everywhere. Then I saw Father Christmas himself .I took my mother by...

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东方韵升 幼苗

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去掉第一行的we;第二行much 改成many; 去掉第三行的to;第五行在spoke后加个to

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